Ideas and Content:
I did better and better with every essay I wrote this year. I demonstrated my ides and content by sharing it without people always falling of track because it isn’t well organized. Brutus is struggling to find out for himself whether or not he should kill his friend Caesar just so that Rome could live free, but the he decides that he loves Rome more than Caesar and he should fight for Rome. “Caesar, this is my answer: Not that I love Caesar less, but that I love Rome more” that is what Brutus tells himself so that he know that he has to keep fighting for Rome’s freedom. Brutus is an honorable man that is willing to slay and destroy Caesars future of becoming the ruler of Rome. He is also willing to kill himself just so that Rome can live free and with a republic. What keeps Brutus fitting for his goal is his love and honor for Rome and its people. I could have improved on my explaining of my ideas and content by being more specific and making it more obvious that I am sharing it with you.
Organization:
In the end of my introductory I do a lot better on keeping on task than with the alchemist essay. I had good organization some of the time but I didn’t keep it constant because some time I would put the wrong topic into the wrong sentences or I would mix up some sentences. For example I could have improved my organization by a huge amount because in the first essay everything was out of place and now mostly everything fits. For example Brutus is struggling to find out for himself whether or not he should kill his friend Caesar just so that Rome could live free, but the he decides that he loves Rome more than Caesar and he should fight for Rome. “Caesar, this is my answer: Not that I love Caesar less, but that I love Rome more” that is what Brutus tells himself so that he know that he has to keep fighting for Rome’s freedom. Brutus is an honorable man that is willing to slay and destroy Caesars future of becoming the ruler of Rome. He is also willing to kill himself just so that Rome can live free and with a republic. What keeps Brutus fitting for his goal is his love and honor for Rome and its people. This is the same as my first example to show how much i have improved from the Alchemist essay.
Personal Growth:
I have seen a different from the alchemist essay and the Julius Caesar essay. I think that the JC essay was just better overall because I improved on my organization specifically with were the right sentences go and how to make the sentences make sense. I also improved on getting better ideas about the topic and making it so that you can understand the topic and its content.
SLR Reflection:
My personal growth wasn't that extravagant but I feel I used the SLR think creatively and Learn enthusiastically and this is because I studied and prepared before all the essays must have been written. Also i though that I thought creatively by picking emotions and descriptions that fits Brutus.
